Некоторые баллы: (Google, если не знаете, почему)
- prefer const
- return early
- clean code (eg. from console.log:s)
- cache fn calls
- functional programming is neat, look up Array.(map, filter, reduce, ...)
- destructuring is neat
- use arr[arr.length] = x; or arr.push(x), no need to manage your own counter
- short-circuit is sometimes neat (condition && expression; instead of if (condition) expression;)
- is queryResult.empty a thing? If it's a normal array, use !arr.length
- define variables in the inner most possible scope it's used in
- if having a promise in an async, make sure to return it
- prefer arrow functions
Я изменил код, чтобы следовать этим пунктам:
const test = ()=> {
const today = new Date();
const addedDate = new Date(today.addDays(7));
return new Promise((resolve)=> {
const final = [];
const emailsQuery = db.collection("email")
// an async/promise/then that's inside another promise, but not returned/awaited
emailsQuery.get().then((querySnapshot) => {
querySnapshot
.map(data=> ({id: data.id, data: data.data()}))
.filter(o=> o.data)
.forEach(({id, data: {email}}) => {
const db2 = db.collection("email").doc(id);
const itemsQuery = db2.collection("list").where("expiaryDate", "<", addedDate.getTime())
// another one!
itemsQuery.get().then((items) => {
const food = items.filter(o=> o).map(o=> o.data()).filter(o=> o)
.forEach(({name, expiaryDate: time})=> ({name, time}))
food.length && final.push({email, food})
}).catch(console.error);
});
// resolving before the two async ones have finished!!
resolve(final);
}).catch(console.error);
});
}
const add = async ()=> {
let response = await test();
return db.collection("sendGrid").add({response})
.then((item) => console.log('item:', item))
.catch(console.error)
}
Теперь мы видим, что есть проблема с асинхронным потоком («проблема синхронизации» в ваших словах). Я добавлю еще одну лучшую практику:
- use async/await when possible
Изменение с помощью этого делает его более понятным и решает проблему:
const test = async ()=> {
const today = new Date();
const addedDate = new Date(today.addDays(7));
const emailsQuery = db.collection("email")
const querySnapshot = await emailsQuery.get()
const emailEntries = querySnapshot
.map(data=> ({id: data.id, data: data.data()}))
.filter(o=> o.data)
// invoking an async fn -> promise; map returns the result of all invoked fns -> array of promises
const promisedItems = emailEntries.map(async ({id, data: {email}}) => {
const db2 = db.collection("email").doc(id);
const itemsQuery = db2.collection("list").where("expiaryDate", "<", addedDate.getTime())
const items = await itemsQuery.get()
const food = items.filter(o=> o).map(o=> o.data()).filter(o=> o)
.forEach(({name, expiaryDate: time})=> ({name, time}))
return {email, food}
});
const items = await Promise.all(promisedItems)
return items.filter(item=> item.food.length)
}
const add = async ()=> {
let response = await test();
return db.collection("sendGrid").add({response})
.then((item) => console.log('item:', item))
.catch(console.error)
}
Теперь поток ясен!
.
Еще более кратко (хотя отсутствие имен var -> менее ясно) - только для ударов:
// (spelled-fixed expiryDate); down to 23% loc, 42% char
const getUnexpiredFoodPerEmails = async ({expiryDateMax} = {
expiryDateMax: new Date(new Date().addDays(7)),
})=> (await Promise.all((await db.collection('email').get())
.map(data=> ({id: data.id, data: data.data()})).filter(o=> o.data)
.map(async ({id, data: {email}})=> ({
email,
food: (await db.collection('email').doc(id).collection('list')
.where('expiryDate', '<', expiryDateMax.getTime()).get())
.filter(o=> o).map(o=> o.data()).filter(o=> o)
.forEach(({name, expiryDate: time})=> ({name, time})),
}))
)).filter(item=> item.food.length)
const add = async ()=> db.collection('sendGrid').add({
response: await getUnexpiredFoodPerEmails(),
}).then(console.log).catch(console.error)
// ...or with names
const getUnexpiredFoodListForEmailId = async ({id, expiryDateMax} = {
expiryDateMax: new Date(new Date().addDays(7)),
})=> (await db.collection('email').doc(id).collection('list')
.where('expiryDate', '<', expiryDateMax.getTime()).get())
.filter(o=> o).map(o=> o.data()).filter(o=> o)
.forEach(({name, expiryDate})=> ({name, time: expiryDate}))
const getEmails = async ()=> (await db.collection('email').get())
.map(data=> ({id: data.id, data: data.data()})).filter(o=> o.data)
const getUnexpiredFoodPerEmails = async ({expiryDateMax} = {
})=> (await Promise.all((await getEmails()).map(async ({id, data})=> ({
email: data.email,
food: await getUnexpiredFoodListForEmailId({id, expiryDateMax}),
})))).filter(item=> item.food.length)
const add = async ()=> db.collection('sendGrid').add({
response: await getUnexpiredFoodPerEmails(),
}).then(console.log).catch(console.error)